Another go....

I tried analysing I met the walrus and counting how it zooms and and out and pans left etc etc... and I've tried to map a similar scenario for my film...

This is how far I got. For some reason the flickeriness doesn't really work and the chromosome should boil I think. I wonder how they made it I met the Walrus....

I think it needs to be quicker and have more 'oumph', also the background should have less going on and fit in better with the foreground